100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups : Week 170


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https://jfb57.wordpress.com/2015/03/10/100-word-challenge-for-grown-ups-week170/

PROMPT:

…the scent was overpowering…

When I entered my home the scent was overpowering!

The scent of a stranger in my own house. The scent of a woman I know.

Why was she here while I wasn’t home?

I walked to our bedroom. OUR bedroom of all places.

There they were. Both in the bedroom. Both naked.

I felt I was going to faint. Then suddenly I felt calm again, turned around never to return to this place again.

Till today when I smell the scent I want to freeze. Life goes on, I don’t want to smell it again.

15 responses to “100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups : Week 170”

  1. Nou het jul my deurmekaar. Is hierdie ‘n ware storie of deel van ‘n challenge?

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    1. He he, toor ek lekker met jou kop!. Dis veronderstel om fiksie te wees! Net 100 woorde is meer as genoeg vir my om te skryf want ek is maar n ou v min woorde( eie ondervindings help natuurlik om dit meer realisties voor te stel!)

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  2. Laat my dink aan Dark Lady van Cher.

    Cher is nogal ‘n goeie storie verteller as ek daaraan dink.

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    1. Ja, is nogal. Het gou eers geluister na Dark Lady.

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  3. I agree. Thank you for your positive comment

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  4. Not a situation anyone wants to find themselves in – and unfortunately, not one to be easily forgotten. Nicely written. 🙂

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  5. Very well written. Not a nice thing to come home to. 😦

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    1. Thank you, don’t think it is a good experience

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  6. mmmmmm …ok ek bly doodstil

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    1. Dis maar hoe dit gaan!…..

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  7. Baie diep storie! Kom jou pyn voel!

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    1. Dankie, dis maar dinge wat mens vergewe maar nie vergeet nie!

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  8. Really liked your story. I can identify as I am divorced. 🙂

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