100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups : Week 170


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100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups – Week#170

PROMPT:

…the scent was overpowering…

When I entered my home the scent was overpowering!

The scent of a stranger in my own house. The scent of a woman I know.

Why was she here while I wasn’t home?

I walked to our bedroom. OUR bedroom of all places.

There they were. Both in the bedroom. Both naked.

I felt I was going to faint. Then suddenly I felt calm again, turned around never to return to this place again.

Till today when I smell the scent I want to freeze. Life goes on, I don’t want to smell it again.


15 responses to “100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups : Week 170”

  1. Spokie sny spoor Avatar
    Spokie sny spoor

    Nou het jul my deurmekaar. Is hierdie ‘n ware storie of deel van ‘n challenge?

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      He he, toor ek lekker met jou kop!. Dis veronderstel om fiksie te wees! Net 100 woorde is meer as genoeg vir my om te skryf want ek is maar n ou v min woorde( eie ondervindings help natuurlik om dit meer realisties voor te stel!)

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      1. Spokie sny spoor Avatar
        Spokie sny spoor

        Wel – goed geskryf!

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  2. Xena Phoenix Avatar

    Laat my dink aan Dark Lady van Cher.

    Cher is nogal ‘n goeie storie verteller as ek daaraan dink.

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      Ja, is nogal. Het gou eers geluister na Dark Lady.

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  3. scrapydotwo Avatar
    scrapydotwo

    I agree. Thank you for your positive comment

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  4. milliethom Avatar

    Not a situation anyone wants to find themselves in – and unfortunately, not one to be easily forgotten. Nicely written. 🙂

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  5. anotherday2paradise Avatar

    Very well written. Not a nice thing to come home to. 😦

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      Thank you, don’t think it is a good experience

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  6. rondomtaliedraai Avatar

    mmmmmm …ok ek bly doodstil

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      Dis maar hoe dit gaan!…..

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  7. nowathome Avatar

    Baie diep storie! Kom jou pyn voel!

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      Dankie, dis maar dinge wat mens vergewe maar nie vergeet nie!

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  8. Susan Langer Avatar

    Really liked your story. I can identify as I am divorced. 🙂

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      Thank you! Same here

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