FFfAW 4-8-2015 : Through the window.


I first thought of not writing this time.

I had a look at the photo and here it goes.

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Through the window

Here I am, waiting again for the follow up episode of suspense.

Yesterday was a really bad day. I was sitting right here. Looking out the window as we are doing just now.

I was listening to the lovely sound of the wind chimes. I love the sound, it is like angels playing a tinkling tune. Suddenly another noise was coming from the left side. A humming noise. Louder and louder till…..

I saw them. They were green and sparkling. They had these feelers on their heads. Their eyes were flashing red. It looked as if they were going to float right through the window. I sat nailed to my chair. They put a written sign against the window saying: We will be back tomorrow!

This is why I called you. I want you to see them and tell my daughter that they were really here.

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12 responses to “FFfAW 4-8-2015 : Through the window.”

  1. milliethom Avatar

    If she’s imagining little aliens knocking on her window, the poor woman’s either massively overtired or seriously in need of help. I wonder if the daughter knows about her mother’s strange turns? You make the wind chimes sound delightful. Nice story, Scrapydo.

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      Thanks, I think her daughter does not believe her mothers ideas of seeing these things.

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      1. milliethom Avatar

        That doesn’t surprise me! 🙂

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        1. scrapydotwo Avatar
          scrapydotwo

          Me too. I think she needs some help to come back to everyday things again! 😀

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  2. rondomtaliedraai Avatar

    Papagaaie … ek is seker dis papagaaie

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      Kan nogal wees. Daardie groot gekleurdes

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  3. Priceless Joy Avatar

    I was wondering if it was all in her mind or if it really happened. Excellent Scrapydo2! I could picture these alien beings buzzing to her window and putting up a sign! Poor woman if she is imagining this stuff.

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      I hope she doesn’t see them again because she won’t digest it after seeing them again!

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  4. Spokie sny spoor Avatar

    Wel … oulik geskryf.

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      Dankie jong. Ek was gladnie in die “mood” om te skryf nie. Die aanbieder vra toe of ek gaan skryf toe dink ek maar om iets te doen. Gaan jy vir Toeka Tokkel bietjie diere gee met so bietjie lyf by?(Hoop so!)

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  5. nowathome Avatar

    Oh my! Where they aliens? 🙂

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      I think she was just imagining it! All it her mind.

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