Off with her head…. Monday finish the story


Mondays Finish the Story – May 4th, 2015

© 2015, Barbara W. Beacham

Finish the story begins with:
“After losing her head, she realized that the rest of her body was falling apart!”

What an awful feeling. She had a throbbing headache after she executed her favourite doll.

“Pink love, my lovely doll! How could you do this to me?” Rachel was thinking back to yesterday.

When she came home, her love doll was in the arms of her best friend. Without a word Rachel grabbed the doll. Put it on the table. She picked up her mother’s big sharp knife.

Shouted: “ Off with her head!”

Whoosh… and the head went to the floor. Rolling, rolling and rolling till it stopped in front of her friends feet.

Rachel pulled the rest of the doll apart.

She saw the doll in pieces and started crying. Rachel’s friend went over and put her arms around her when she realized that it was Rachel that was falling apart because of her experience with her parents…

Mondays Finish the Story

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22 responses to “Off with her head…. Monday finish the story”

  1. Olga Avatar

    Solank dit werk.

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      Mens weet nooit, dalk wek dit dalk nie! Frustrasie kan nogal vreemde uitwerking op mense hê

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      1. Olga Avatar

        Feit soos ‘n perd.

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  2. thecoastalquill Avatar

    Sometimes our actions are cover for our true hurts. Nice to know her friend understood. Enjoyed very much!

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      That is very true. Sometimes afterward you can’t think that you could do something like that. Good friends are treasures. Thanks for the comment and reading my writing!

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  3. Priceless Joy Avatar

    I was trying to add more words and accidently hit the publish button. That was a great story Scrapydo2!

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

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  4. Priceless Joy Avatar

    I agree, it is good that her friend was there to comfort her. How sad that she had that much anger because of what had been done to her.

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      It is good to have someone to comfort you when things like that happen!

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      1. Priceless Joy Avatar

        Absolutely! I just feel really sorry for the girl because of her parents. It must have been horrible.

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        1. scrapydotwo Avatar
          scrapydotwo

          Really sad when the circumstances are so horrible. Such a frustration if you can do nothing to prevent things, something has to break at the end!

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          1. Priceless Joy Avatar

            That is true. Children pretty much have nothing they can do when it is their parents offending them.

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      Beslis, te veel TV dramas maak daarvoor!

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  5. babso2you Avatar

    Savvy friend! Well done Scrapydo! Thanks for writing again for the Mondays Finish the Story challenge! Be well… ^..^

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      Thank you I just had to make this one a horror story! Waiting for Monday again. Hope you are well after your last treatment! LOL

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      1. babso2you Avatar

        It was really a good story…Monday should be another good one!…

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        1. scrapydotwo Avatar
          scrapydotwo

          Sweet! Keep well!

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  6. nowathome Avatar

    Ah!!! So sad!

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      Glad her friend could be there to comfort her!

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