Finish the story begins with: “The crew of the Angel Flame received orders to head out.”
Jack had to hurry up to board the submarine. They were on their way!
Two days ago Jack had a phone call from Anne informing him that she could not marry him. No explanation, nothing. He felt helpless and sad. It felt as if the whole world had given way under him.
He thought of taking his own life but first went to the pub. At that moment captain Todd was recruiting sailors. Two of his old hands had the flu. Jack explained to Todd that he could navigate a ship. Deal done!
Jack had to take Spock to the kennels. He arranged that his sister would pick Spock up and look after him. Jack quickly threw some underwear, t-shirts and shorts in a plastic bag and off he went.
To hell with Anne!
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15 responses to “New life : Monday finish the story – May 18, 2015”
Love your short stories. You choose interesting backgrounds.
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Thank you for reading my stories! Welcome also to my blog. 😀
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Sounds like time for a fresh start!
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Yes, that’s for sure! Good he had the opportunity to move out!
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Good for Jack!! Hope he has fun!!! Love the dog’s name… nice tribute!!
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Yes , I think he may as well meet a female sailor and the can sail off away from the past. Spock with them too.
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You go Boykie!
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He better!
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What better way to turn around your life! So much for Anne! I hope he has some great adventures with Captain Todd! Nicely done Scrapydo! Thanks for writing for the MFtS challenge, and be well. Hope to see you again on the upcoming challenge… ^..^
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He for sure is going to enjoy it being away from this so called innocent girl! Enjoy your week and I’m looking forward to next challenge
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You enjoy your week too! Could be a ghostly post…
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How sad that his fiance broke up with him! It’s good he went to the Pub because he didn’t kill himself. I hope his new sailing adventure is a good one! Great story Scrapydotwo!
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He really loved her. She is a bad girl? It had to be , to meet captain Todd. Lovely outing he is going to have
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At least he did not take his own life!
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He is stronger than Anne who wanted to do it. That’s how they met in the first place
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