FFfAW Week of 06/03/2015

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Eight happy looking young campers! As you can see they look very content. Not for long!

These teenagers went out on a bush camp with their tutor.They played a bad trick on the tutor this morning.

A rescue helicopter had to pick the tutor up and took him to the nearby hospital. He had broken both his legs and was in a lot of pain. This does not look and sound good.

One of the rescue team guided the boys back to base camp.

They were happily joking about the situation and what happened this morning. I wonder how they will react when the local police interview them one by one!

What is going to happen to them? Are they going to be locked up?

The boys were supposed to return to base camp after a week of camping. They are all alone and on their own now.

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29 responses to “FFfAW Week of 06/03/2015”

loricarlson66

June 16, 2015 at 12:01 pm

An appropriate ending for such a rowdy group of boys. Let’s see how long they last out there alone at base camp. Great story, Scrapydo!

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  June 17, 2015 at 2:36 am
  
  Yes, I think they will come to their senses after a day or two in jail with nobody to bail them out.
  
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Toortsie

June 9, 2015 at 7:28 am

Die eerste kyk na die foto het my laat wonder of die kinders Egiptiese kinders is.

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  June 9, 2015 at 8:45 am
  
  Kan dalk wees maar ek dink is maar meer Indiese nasie
  
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rondomtaliedraai

June 8, 2015 at 6:23 pm

Sug …. nou wonder ek nogal wat nou gaan gebeur…

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  June 9, 2015 at 4:17 am
  
  Kan of goed of sleg wees. Sal maar sien hoe dit afloop! 🙂
  
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Priceless Joy

June 8, 2015 at 4:41 pm

Hi Scrapydotwo! You probably know by now that I like to stop by occasionally and express my appreciation to those who regularly contribute to the Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers challenge. I look forward to reading your stories each week and I’m sure they others do as well. Thank you for your continued friendship and loyalty!

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  June 9, 2015 at 4:20 am
  
  You are always welcome. Thank you for coming up with a different picture each week. I enjoy participating. Keep it going and coming my friend! 😀
  
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  1. Priceless Joy
    
    June 9, 2015 at 9:57 am
    
    Thank you so much and I will!! 🙂
    
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Madoqua

June 8, 2015 at 3:37 pm

Ah, but perhaps this was a training exercise, to see what to do when something bad ‘really’ happens? Perhaps no-one really got hurt and the youngsters were pleased with what they had seen and learnt?

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  June 9, 2015 at 4:21 am
  
  Could be like that(I hope so anyway) I’ll still think about it how to go with it.
  
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milliethom

June 8, 2015 at 3:09 pm

Not a very nice group of boys, are they? To laugh when someone is in so much pain because of their trick is really awful. They need someone to teach them a lesson. It isn’t as though they’re too young to understand, either. I really hope this isn’t a true story, Scrapydo.

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  June 9, 2015 at 4:24 am
  
  Not a real story at all (Shows how your emotional state opens the way for a bad story). All made up. It can go to the bad or the good side of the whole story.
  
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  1. milliethom
    
    June 9, 2015 at 8:36 am
    
    The power of fiction … great! 🙂
    
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      June 9, 2015 at 8:50 am
      
      I love it to use my imagination. Did not know I could have so much fun. It just flows as soon as I am concentrating on the given picture!
      
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Priceless Joy

June 8, 2015 at 11:27 am

They sound like a group of psychopaths! I agree with Hester, to laugh about their leader breaking both legs is downright evil. I hope the police scare some sense into these boys! Great story Scrapydo2! I would like to know more.

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  June 9, 2015 at 4:25 am
  
  Yes, sometimes kids can do bad things and then laugh about it. The police is going to give them a good shake up.
  
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  1. Priceless Joy
    
    June 9, 2015 at 9:58 am
    
    LOL! Good. They need it. 😀
    
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perdebytjie

June 8, 2015 at 10:14 am

Sjoe,amper glo ek die storie!

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  June 9, 2015 at 4:28 am
  
  Die storie het nog n storie ook ha ha. Skryf dit eers op rof as mens dit so kan noem. Copy dit en paste dit in my pos. Toe ek gister copy moes ek seker delete gedruk het. Daar was niks oor van my oorspronklike skrywe! Met Trompie n ent gaan loop en toe weer geskryf! Moes gesien het daar is iets aan die broei! 🙂
  
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  1. perdebytjie
    
    June 9, 2015 at 2:41 pm
    
    Ag,dit breek sommer mens se spoed!Gewoonlik is ek so gedreineer,dat my tweede probeerslag flou en sonder inspirasie is.
    
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      June 9, 2015 at 8:21 pm
      
      Ek wou ook eers sommer opgee maar besluit toe terwyl ek die storie in my kop het moet ek maar deurdruk en sorg dat dit nie weer gebeur nie
      
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HesterLeyNel

June 8, 2015 at 9:26 am

Is this a true story Scrapy? Playing that kind of joke is bad enough, but laughing about it afterwards is downright evil.

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  June 9, 2015 at 4:30 am
  
  No, it is all fiction. Shows in which dark mood I was when I wrote this. Youngsters can be very rude when they are in a group.
  
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  1. HesterLeyNel
    
    June 9, 2015 at 6:20 am
    
    the mob mentality
    
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      June 9, 2015 at 7:06 am
      
      That’s it and if they are “smokers and drinkers” it usually turns out ugly
      
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nowathome

June 8, 2015 at 5:55 am

A joke gone bad!!

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  June 8, 2015 at 7:15 am
  
  Yes! Those teenager can be very naughty
  
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  1. nowathome
    
    June 9, 2015 at 5:39 am
    
    that is for sure!
    
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