Secret hiding : FFfAW Week 07-22-2015

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“Mmmm, what are they up to?” wondered secret agent Splatter.

He had been spying on Lucy and Trudy for 3 weeks now.

Splatter installed a permanent pair of trench binoculars when he could not go out to the island house to investigate.

“Ah, wait a bit. There they both are now!” Taking his camera he zoomed in to get some evidence of the two women. They were trespassing that’s for sure. Back to the binoculars, he could see Lucy carrying an animal like object. It whirligig around in her arms.

”They sure have the animal with them,” Splatter mumbled. “Hope they are not going to let it escape. It is a one of a kind of endangered dragon serpent mr Cory told me! Very important that I report back to him now”

Splatter started dialing and kept on looking through his binoculars. “Oh no, it can’t be!” …..

Word count 151

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2015-07-28

FFfAW, Fiction, Writing

adventure, fiction, story, writing

23 responses to “Secret hiding : FFfAW Week 07-22-2015”

momtheobscure

July 30, 2015 at 2:47 am

Very nice, but the cliffhanger! Did they drop it? Is it something else? Id live to read more

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1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com
  
  July 30, 2015 at 4:32 am
  
  I’m working on the follow up. Hopefully will finish it by Saturday!
  
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rondomtaliedraai

July 28, 2015 at 5:44 pm

Ag nee … vertel vertel…

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1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com
  
  July 28, 2015 at 8:44 pm
  
  Ha ha sal moet verder dink! Ek sien hierdie drakegesiggie in my gedagte Oë groot en smekend!
  
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  1. rondomtaliedraai
    
    July 29, 2015 at 5:23 pm
    
    Toothless die drakie
    
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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com
      
      July 29, 2015 at 8:37 pm
      
      Het n paar oulike drakies gekry, nou moet die storie nog kom.
      
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nowathome

July 28, 2015 at 12:06 pm

I would love to know what happened next!!! Great story!

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1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com
  
  July 28, 2015 at 8:45 pm
  
  Ha ha, thank you. I think I have to do a follow up. Maybe before I do the next new ones
  
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milliethom

July 28, 2015 at 11:29 am

The image of the little dragon, wriggling like a whirligig, really made me chuckle. Just like any baby! I wonder what Lucy and Trudy intend to do with him …? Whatever it is, I think they’d better do it quick before Mummy finds out where he is! Intriguing ending, too. Could that be Mummy zooming in, or something else…? Perhaps it’s the means of transport to carry the baby dragon away to be sold. A real cliff hanger ending. Fun story, Scrapydo. 🙂

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1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com
  
  July 28, 2015 at 8:49 pm
  
  Ha ha thank you! I’ll think about a follow up. Even my sister wants to know what happened next. I can see this poor baby dragon, big frightened eyes begging the ladies to let him go back to his mummy!
  
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  1. milliethom
    
    July 28, 2015 at 8:57 pm
    
    I don’t think you can do a follow up on FFfAW, Scrapydo. PJ asked people not to do serial posts a little while ago. Perhaps you could do it as a post unconnected to the challenge.
    
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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com
      
      July 28, 2015 at 9:08 pm
      
      I know and won’t do it as part of FFfAW. I’ll do it as an extra own writing or something like that. I intend anyway to expand some of my better short pieces just for the exercise!
      
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      1. milliethom
        
        July 28, 2015 at 9:15 pm
        
        I’ll look forward to reading about that little dragon. He’s so cute. 🙂
        
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        scrapydo2.wordpress.com
        
        July 28, 2015 at 9:25 pm
        
        I am going to look for a perfect picture too. First going for my morning tea drinking session. Every Wednesday we meet for a cuppa at 10:30am. I never miss it!
        
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        milliethom
        
        July 28, 2015 at 9:28 pm
        
        Ah… tea’s the answer to every problem, Scrapydo. Go get it! 🙂
        
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Priceless Joy

July 28, 2015 at 1:02 am

Wow! Great story! Now you’ve left me hanging! LOL! I hope they don’t hurt the little dragon.

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1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com
  
  July 28, 2015 at 2:48 am
  
  They are going to have big problems if something happens to it. Could be a Loch Ness monster baby?
  
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  1. Priceless Joy
    
    July 28, 2015 at 2:50 am
    
    Do they look like dragons?
    
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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com
      
      July 28, 2015 at 2:55 am
      
      Who knows? Nobody has seen one yet so why not?
      
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      1. Priceless Joy
        
        July 28, 2015 at 2:58 am
        
        I thought they had long skinny necks and a big wide body. I guess that’s what it could be!
        
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        scrapydo2.wordpress.com
        
        July 28, 2015 at 3:01 am
        
        Splatter better see that the two ladies do not escape with this precious “animal”
        
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        Priceless Joy
        
        July 28, 2015 at 3:11 am
        
        That’s very true! This animal is rare and exotic!
        
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        scrapydo2.wordpress.com
        
        July 28, 2015 at 3:18 am
        
        Worth a lot of money too! Wonder who is going to win- black market or the con servers
        
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