Secret hiding : FFfAW Week 07-22-2015


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“Mmmm, what are they up to?” wondered secret agent Splatter.

He had been spying on Lucy and Trudy for 3 weeks now.

Splatter installed a permanent pair of trench binoculars when he could not go out to the island house to investigate.

“Ah, wait a bit. There they both are now!” Taking his camera he zoomed in to get some evidence of the two women. They were trespassing that’s for sure. Back to the binoculars, he could see Lucy carrying  an animal like object. It whirligig around in her arms.

”They sure have the animal with them,” Splatter mumbled. “Hope they are not going to let it escape. It is a one of a kind of endangered dragon serpent mr Cory told me! Very important that I report back to him now”

Splatter started dialing and kept on looking through his binoculars. “Oh no, it can’t be!” …..

Word count 151

23 responses to “Secret hiding : FFfAW Week 07-22-2015”

  1. Very nice, but the cliffhanger! Did they drop it? Is it something else? Id live to read more

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    1. I’m working on the follow up. Hopefully will finish it by Saturday!

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  2. Ag nee … vertel vertel…

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    1. Ha ha sal moet verder dink! Ek sien hierdie drakegesiggie in my gedagte Oë groot en smekend!

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        1. Het n paar oulike drakies gekry, nou moet die storie nog kom.

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  3. I would love to know what happened next!!! Great story!

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    1. Ha ha, thank you. I think I have to do a follow up. Maybe before I do the next new ones

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  4. The image of the little dragon, wriggling like a whirligig, really made me chuckle. Just like any baby! I wonder what Lucy and Trudy intend to do with him …? Whatever it is, I think they’d better do it quick before Mummy finds out where he is! Intriguing ending, too. Could that be Mummy zooming in, or something else…? Perhaps it’s the means of transport to carry the baby dragon away to be sold. A real cliff hanger ending. Fun story, Scrapydo. 🙂

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    1. Ha ha thank you! I’ll think about a follow up. Even my sister wants to know what happened next. I can see this poor baby dragon, big frightened eyes begging the ladies to let him go back to his mummy!

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      1. I don’t think you can do a follow up on FFfAW, Scrapydo. PJ asked people not to do serial posts a little while ago. Perhaps you could do it as a post unconnected to the challenge.

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        1. I know and won’t do it as part of FFfAW. I’ll do it as an extra own writing or something like that. I intend anyway to expand some of my better short pieces just for the exercise!

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          1. I’ll look forward to reading about that little dragon. He’s so cute. 🙂

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            1. I am going to look for a perfect picture too. First going for my morning tea drinking session. Every Wednesday we meet for a cuppa at 10:30am. I never miss it!

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              1. Ah… tea’s the answer to every problem, Scrapydo. Go get it! 🙂

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  5. Wow! Great story! Now you’ve left me hanging! LOL! I hope they don’t hurt the little dragon.

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    1. They are going to have big problems if something happens to it. Could be a Loch Ness monster baby?

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      1. Do they look like dragons?

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        1. Who knows? Nobody has seen one yet so why not?

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          1. I thought they had long skinny necks and a big wide body. I guess that’s what it could be!

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            1. Splatter better see that the two ladies do not escape with this precious “animal”

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              1. That’s very true! This animal is rare and exotic!

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                1. Worth a lot of money too! Wonder who is going to win- black market or the con servers

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