Ruins : Mondays Finish the Story – August 10, 2015


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This is where you can find instructions on how to write this challenge.

Thanks today to J.A. over at Living Author Society for suggesting a topic for this week’s challenge.

Ruins - © 2015, Barbara W. Beacham

Ruins – © 2015, Barbara W. Beacham

Finish the story begins with:  “Where did they go?”

“Where did they go?” Ma Suzy asked Pa Glen. She thought he said that they would find the children there.

“I don’t know Suzy. The stranger gave me the map and instructions. Here we are. He did not say that we would only find ruins!”

Suzy started crying. Not human tears but splashes of red blood. She also started moaning like a lonely wolf. Glen had to put his fingers in his ears to keep the eerie howling out. It scared the hell out of him seeing his wife turning into a werewolf. Her hair stood wild and her eyes glowed dangerously. She came nearer and nearer to him. He had to do something.

Suddenly he remembered the words of the stranger:

Don’t look her in the eyes. Run to the ruins. You will find your children there. Be careful.

Word count 151

Mondays Finish the Story

20 responses to “Ruins : Mondays Finish the Story – August 10, 2015”

  1. I like the way you show Ma Suzy turning into a werewulf: blood-red tears and glowing eyes. That was a bit of a surprise! And I hope the stranger’s words prove to be true and Pa can get his children away to safety – not an easy task with a crazed werewulf on their heels. Good story, Scrapydo.

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    1. Glad you enjoyed the story! I think Pa has to follow the advise of the stranger to escape with the children. Maybe there is a potion for Ma to change her back again.

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      1. What a terrible situation for Ma and Pa to be in. For Ma to be cursed as a werewulf has ruined their lives. Perhaps there is a potion – somewhere. 🙂

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        1. I think Pa has got something up his sleeve! The stranger told him more than he explained to Ma.

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  2. Another excellent story Scrapydo! Thanks for another contribution and be well… ^..^

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    1. Thank you very much to you too. Have a better week and keep well! LOL

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  3. Brilliant story! I do hope they got away safely!

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    1. Thanks, yes they could escape if they follow the strangers instructions.

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  4. Hehehehe jou stories raak geweldadig sus! Netnou het jy nagmerries

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    1. Ja wat, die lewe is nie net reguit ry of loop nie! Dramas is nodig.

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  5. I hope he and the children can get away from her and be safe. Great story!

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    1. He has to follow the strangers instructions. I still need to think about a good way of escape! Thanks for reading and your kind comment.

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  6. Very scary! Hope everything comes right in the end.

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    1. Thought so too. I think there is going a way to escape. The stranger gave more instructions.

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  7. I hope he finds his children and some way of stopping his wife from becoming a danger to them. 🙂 Good story.

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    1. Thanks, the stranger gave him more instructions how to get rid of his so called wife!

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  8. Interessante SciFi storielyn!

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    1. Ek moes aan my seun verduidelik dat dit n fantasie storie is. Hy het nie mooi verstaan wat aangaan nie. Moes hom toe vertel dis soos SciFi

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  9. I hope he is careful… but that’s probably not easy …

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    1. No, don’t know how he is going to save the children without her seeing them. Scary I think he needs a large dog like you to chase the wolf away.

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