Time is up. Sunday Photo Fiction – August 23, 2015


Sunday Photo Fiction – August 23rd 2015

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An intricate looking wristwatch

An intricate looking wristwatch

Time is up!

Looking at the watch, frightened Gordon out of his shoes!

Gordon walked down the busy Main Street of the big city. He looked for a place to  have a cup of coffee. Suddenly a hand with the strangest watch appeared from behind. In the meantime a hand closed around his elbow. He was pushed to the side of the pavement.

‘Don’t make a sound or try to run!’ an icy voice whispered.

‘Take this watch, as soon as the long arm reaches ten past two throw it away as far as you can! Don’t hesitate, just do it!’

Gordon stood perplexed and still. Watch in hand, the stranger gone.

Suddenly a taxi came veering right up to him. He jumped right out of his shoes avoiding been driven over. The watch flew out of his hand and smashed to pieces against the shop wall.

Phew that was close!

(Word count: 158)


30 responses to “Time is up. Sunday Photo Fiction – August 23, 2015”

  1. luckyjc007 Avatar

    Good story..great suspense and problem solved immediately!

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      Thanks, well said, all in one story! 😀

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  2. Priceless Joy Avatar

    Great story! That taxi actually saved the day!

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      Thanks! I first thought of exploding the watch but I wasn’t in the mood for blood ad rubble! 🙂

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      1. Priceless Joy Avatar

        I liked the story your wrote!! Great job!

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        1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

          Thank you for your kind words!

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  3. rondomtaliedraai Avatar

    Mens verloor meer as horlosies in vandag se verkeer.

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      Ek besef dit! My Afrika agtergrond het die taxi en raakry gesien!

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  4. perdebytjie Avatar

    Baie goed geskryf.Gelukkig het die bom nie ontplof nie en die storie eindig goed!

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      Sê juis vir Tina, my Afrika agtergrond weet van taxis en raakry, nie van ontploffings nie!

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  5. Sunday Fiction Avatar

    Great little story. Sounds like something out of the Twilight Zone 🙂

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      I am not SF person – not familiar with Twilight Zone. Thanks for reading and comment!

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      1. Sunday Fiction Avatar

        🙂 You’re welcome

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  6. ceayr Avatar

    Hilarious!
    And how many pairs of shoes was he wearing!

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      Depends on who he was! A runner with an extra pair for in case things like this happen,ha ha

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  7. Kameel Avatar
    Kameel

    Goed geskryf. Dit kon net in Suid Afrika afgespeel het…. daardie taxi verstasn 🙂

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    1. Kameel Avatar
      Kameel

      Ag toggie, tik op my foon…. en maak foute. Verstaan!!!!

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      1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

        Ha ha it happens! Slip of the finger.

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    2. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      Dankie. Suid Afrika bly maar deel van my ondervindingswêreld. Net die werklike bom storie hoort nie heeltemaal daar nie.

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  8. Leya Avatar

    Nicely done!

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      Thanks for reading and commenting.

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  9. Toortsie Avatar

    Uitstekend geskryf!

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      Dankie jong, ek het heeldag nie lus gehad vir skryf nie. Trompie se narkose en uitsny van gewas pla maar heelryd. Die een het toe darem gekom toe ek gaan sit het en myself gedwing het om te begin.

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      1. perdebytjie Avatar

        Ag foeitog,ek hoop alles is reg met Trompie.Dis so ontstellend as mens se hondjie siek is!

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        1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

          Dankie jong, ek het skoon n “af”dag gister gehad. Vandag gaan hul die verbande afhaal en dalk die dreineringpypie uithaal. Dis n groot sny wat gemaak is.

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          1. perdebytjie Avatar

            Laat weet asseblief hoe dit met die outjie gaan..drukkie!

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            1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

              Die dreineringbuis is uitgehaal. Moet hom maar net nog rustig hou dat hy nie die wond ooptrek nie. Hy is okay, ogies raak nog maar bietjie dof. Nou net wag vir uitslag van die weggestuurde stukkie. Dankie vir drukkie.

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              1. perdebytjie Avatar

                Ek hou duim vas!

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                1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

                  Dankie en geniet jou wegbreek!

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