A and I Poetry Challenge no 2: April 2018


April Poetry Challenge and Poetry Tips

 

The A and I Poetry challenge is jointly hosted by Amanda and Ineke and is open to everyone, from complete beginners to advanced writers or aspiring poets. The challenge will run from March to October 2018.  We will share tips, offer a monthly prompt and post link backs to your published Poetry posts.

Please scroll down to see April’s poetry writing tips.

Instructions for joining are on the Poetry Challenge Page. You are very welcome to enter.

You can write any kind of poem that you like, as the prompt is merely a suggestion. Write in any language you like; it certainly doesn’t have to be in English. As this is a joint challenge with Amanda and me (Ineke), I will also post the challenge in Afrikaans on my blog, so if that language suits you better, visit me here.

N.B. Please leave a comment here if you wish to be included in the Pingbacks for this month.

Poetry Challenge – April Prompt:

Write a poem that begins with the last thing you can remember someone saying to you yesterday. So if you can use that line two to three times throughout your poem.

Here is my Poem for April,

Same time, same place

My good friend Jan and I

Same time; same place

 

Tuesdays every week

For about two years now

Same time; same place

 

Morning tea meeting

And greeting.

Drinking, eating

Coffee and Almond cake for Jan

And

English breakfast tea plus

Savoury sconce for me.

Chatting

Exchanging ideas

Great friendship.

Always the day before

Same time; same place

Just making sure

not to miss out.

Ineke 2018
I can’t wait to read what you come up with this month. Don’t forget to link back to this post, and leave a link and comment here so Amanda and Ineke can find your post.

Poetry Tips

  • Write poetry as often as you can.
  • Designate a special notebook (or space in your notebook) for poetry writing.
  • Embrace metaphors but stay away from clichés ( I find this especially difficult!)
  • Don’t be afraid to write a bad poem. You can write a better one later.
  • Don’t back away from your thoughts or feelings. Express them!

Poetry Techniques –  Metaphor and Simile

Whilst there are many different styles for writing poetry, you may find one or more works for you. No matter what style or techniques you use, a poem can reach people in ways that other text can’t. It might be abstract or concrete but often it conveys strong emotions. Some common techniques used in poetry are onomatopoeia, alliteration, assonance, rhyming, simile and metaphor. Using metaphor and similes will bring imagery and concrete words into your writing.

The difference between simile and metaphor is explained here:

A metaphor is a statement that pretends one thing is really something else:

Example: “The lead singer is an elusive salamander.”

This phrase does not mean that the lead singer is literally a salamander. Rather, it takes an abstract characteristic of a salamander (elusiveness) and projects it onto the person. By using metaphor to describe the lead singer, the poet creates a much more vivid picture of him/her than if the poet had simply said “The lead singer’s voice is hard to pick out.”

Simile

A simile is a statement where you say one object is similar to another object. Similes use the words “like” or “as.”

Example: “He was curious as a caterpillar” or “He was curious, like a caterpillar”

This phrase takes one quality of a caterpillar and projects it onto a person. It is an easy way to attach concrete images to feelings and character traits that might usually be described with abstract words.[Credit: Relo Pakistan]

Note: A simile is not any better or worse than a metaphor. The point to remember is that comparison, inference, and suggestion are all important tools of poetry; similes and metaphors are merely one of the tools in your poetry writing toolbox that will help.

Amanda did all the writing. Thanks to her for doing the hard work.

Enjoy “testing out” the challenge.

Ineke

For more info visit my March post here:

A and I Poetry Challenge. First Month’s Poems

March Challenge poems

Thanks, Hester for doing the challenge in Afrikaans and English

#AandIPoetryChallenge: March 2018 – This Day

 

5 April: I forgot to press publish! Sorry all!

 


45 responses to “A and I Poetry Challenge no 2: April 2018”

  1. A and I Poetry Challenge no 3: May – I scrap 2 Avatar

    […] Ineke writes on a close friendship in Same Time, Same Place […]

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  2. PurplePumpernickel Avatar

    Thank you (and Amanda) for conceiving & hosting this challenge! I think it is a wonderful forum for us to share in our love for words!

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      Thank you. I hope to see some poems from you too?

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        1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

          I put the new challenge up yesterday. Hope to read what you have in your mind!

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  3. A and I Poetry Challenge No. 3 May – Something to Ponder About Avatar

    […] Ineke writes on a close friendship in Same Time, Same Place […]

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  4. André de la Port Avatar
    André de la Port
  5. André de la Port Avatar
    André de la Port

    Ek sal graag wil deelneem

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      Oooo maar dis te lekker. Jy is welkom. Ek het nie Aprilmaand kans gehad om die uitdaging in Afrikaans te vertaal nie. Hopelik gaan dit beter met Mei se uitdaginopdrag. Jy is baie welkom en dankie vir belangstelling. Ek gaan jou gedig se link insit met my terugvoer.

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  6. vronlacroix Avatar

    https://rimons33.wordpress.com/2018/04/07/the-woman-in-the-post-office/ Hi again, here’s a link, sorry that I wasted your time. It’s a simple poem, but I hope that you like it.

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      No, you did not waste my time I read some lovely pieces. Thanks for the link. Awesome poem short and sweet. Glad you took part this month.

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      1. vronlacroix Avatar

        Thankyou for the inspiration.

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        1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

          You are most welcome.

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    2. Forestwood Avatar

      Thanks so much for taking part. Reading or writing a poem is never wasted time!

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      1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

        I agree. It’s easy and you don’t need all the knowledge of the language too. I’m going to introduce the poetry to my writing group on Friday. One of our 5 words is poetry.

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        1. Forestwood Avatar

          That is great Ineke! Maybe they can write a poem that could be posted on our poetry challenge?

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          1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

            Good idea. I hope there is one that used poetry too.

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  7. Abrie Joubert Avatar

    Sal nog dink oor gedig ek nie digter alhoewel ek van digterlike taalgebruik hou

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      Ek voel ook so. Die ding is as mens dit nie regtig doen of gebruik om jou uit te druk nie sal jy nooit weet hoe dit voel om te dig nie en of jy daarvan hou nie.

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  8. vronlacroix Avatar

    Hello, your poetry challenge caught my attention, and this theme seemed relevant to me and universally as an aspect of loneliness for so many of us.

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      Hi, welcome to my blog and the challenge. I am glad you made a comment, it also helps to lift loneliness to make contact with the unknown. Are you going to try your hand at a poem this month? I have never done any poetry but trying it gives me a different way of expressing my feelings.

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      1. vronlacroix Avatar

        Hi, I have linked a poem to your blog but maybe it did’nt work if you’ve not recieved notification. A poem called, The woman at the post office, on my blog, Simply Snapshots.

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        1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

          The link did not show up in the comments. Would you mind sending the link again please? I would love to read it. I paged through many of your posts but could not find it.

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  9. Kameel Avatar
    Kameel

    Ek het ook so ‘n same time same place vriendin vir jare gehad…. toe gebeur die lewe, en kleinkinders en kreupel suster moet aandag kry. Mis nogsteeds ons Donderdae saam.
    Jy sit lekker in ZL terwyl ons voortvlugtiges nou deur Abrie se slim kop êrens in die berge is. Gaan lees gerus… en kom kuier vir ons met jou musk. 😊 Lekker slaap

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      Dis heerlik om so n kuier-vriendin te he. Ons kuier nie by ons huise nie ons maak dit n uitgaan geleentheid. Vriendin is 81 en daar is baie wat met haar aan die gebeur is. Gedagtes werk nie so lekker, bestuur nog maar maak foute(wat volgens my gevaarlik is) hul het trappe i hul huis wat nie goed vir ou bene is nie. Ai, ek sien myself al oor so 10 jaar verder! Ek sal bietjie daar by die klomp voortvlugtiges gaan draai die naweek. Petrol was so duur die Paasnaweek dat ek nie wou waag om oor te vlieg nie! Een van die dae gaan immigrasie uitvind wat ek doen. Hul is juis besig met n heksejag op immigrante wat onwettig is en die stelsel uitbuit. Sal nie graag na SA gedeporteer wil word nie.

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      A goed om te weet jy het weer probeer. Ek gaan naweek kyk wat jy geskryf het en ook die Afrikaanse deel opsit. TYd het my net die week ingehaal.

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  10. HesterLeyNel Avatar

    It was fun. Ek gaan weer probeer hierdie maand. Dankie vir die geleentheid wat julle skep.

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      Eks bly jy het nog nie opgegee nie! Ek gaan die naweek die Afrikaanse stuk opsit. Moet nog eers weer vertaal ens.

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      1. HesterLeyNel Avatar

        Ek trek swaar op die oomblik met werk, die AtoZ challenge en die Toweropstalsage, maar gaan tyd inruim, by hook or by crook.

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        1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

          Jy is omtrent aan die gang. Gelukig het jy darem hele maand tyd om te dig. Maak ook nie saak as jy dit later doen nie. Ek het heel agter geraak met lees van jou A-Z.Sal die naweek moet opvang. Self die Toweropstal episode het agter geraak. Kameel het jus gese ek moet gaan kyk wat Abrie met ons aanvang.

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          1. HesterLeyNel Avatar

            Ek is besig om speed reading na ‘n nuwe vlak toe te neem. Ek dink na dese gaan ek weer ‘n bietjie terugkeer na photo challenges – prentjies lees vinniger.

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            1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

              Dis waar. Tina het juis gese ek moet weer bietjie deelneem aan Photo Challenge wat ek altyd geniet en net nie tyd voor gehad het nie. My leesvermoe is baie beperk. Ek lees stadig maar neem elke woord in en vergeet nie sommer nie. Dit hou my baie terug. Kannie speed read nie, nou nog as ek stukke moet lees as ons skryfsessies het, het ander dit al tweekeer gelees en ek is nog maar halfpad. Partykeer wens ek dat ek dit kan doen. glo nie dit sal meer kan gebeur nie.

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              1. HesterLeyNel Avatar

                Daar is speed reading kursusse beskikbaar op die rekenaar as jy wil probeer. Op die ou einde vind ‘n ou maar jou eie pad.

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                1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

                  Dis dalk my volgende ding om aan te pak. Eks op oomblik besig met n baie interessante 4 weke oor memoir skrywe. Heewat insig al gekry.

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                  1. HesterLeyNel Avatar

                    Dis altyd lekker om iets nuuts by te leer.

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                    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

                      Stem saam. Maak mens ryker.

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  11. Forestwood Avatar

    What a wonderful friendship you have with Jan. Someone to share joys and sorrows with. A good friend and a lovely weekly tradition encapsulated in your poem this month, Ineke.

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      We share same interests and just enjoy each others company every time we meet.

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      1. Forestwood Avatar

        The sign of excellent compatibility. Girls need a good friend like that.

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        1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

          I work wonders when you had your weeks chat.

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          1. Forestwood Avatar

            Visiting with a good friend is often touted as being a better method than medical treatments to lifts one’s mood significantly

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            1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

              True, we both feel more relaxed after talking about the deeper matter than just chit-chat. We also support each other’s feelings which helps to calm us both down without making a call at the dr.

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  12. perdebytjie Avatar

    Ek kan so assosieer met jou vers,Ineke. Ek het ook so ‘n vriendin. Niks kom by daardie same time same place nie!

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      Beslis, ons doen dit nou al meer as twee jaar en ons ondersteun mekaar waar ons kan en kuier heerlik.

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