Short story by Amanda

Sunday Sayings – “Home, Ship, Home”

Sep 1, 2019Forestwood


I just can’t do it! I can’t,” he implored. Manfred was clearly beside himself.

Holly paused to let the tension digest before replying, “Can’t you negotiate with them, Mannie?

Manfred looked sad, then stubbornly fixed his jaw, explaining, “No, I just can’t go back. It won’t work.

Holly decided Manfred wasn’t going to budge. It was hard to understand why he was so fixated on quitting the job he’d started just a day or two before. After all, working in a food truck was good work experience, even if the Manager had indeed abused him and rostered him on at weekends.

Holly also suspected that if Manfred quit this job, he’d find it difficult to survive and worse still, he’d lose the routine and direction he sorely needed in his life. Teenage boys with time on their hands created trouble; something Holly had witnessed with her own brothers.

So, ah – what’s your plan now?” she ventured, after letting the silence hang for a minute.


Well, I’ve been thinking about doing street entertainment, so I can start my own business,” Manfred began enthusiastically. “I’d love to remodel shipping containers as cheap accommodation.” “They’re portable, cheap – everyone wants one.”

A business, hey? thought Holly. “You could call it, Home, ship, Home,” she joked.

Manfred’s face lit up, giving Holly a warm feeling inside. Since meeting Manfred on the park bench months before, she’d grown to like his confidence and enthusiasm. He’d charmed her with easy conversation and a good dose of charisma, but she knew he was dangerously impulsive. And that was worrisome.

After promises to meet again, they parted ways. Holly back to her family in the suburbs, and Manfred to who knows where. Holly wondered where he’d sleep that night. He said it was often safer to walk the streets at night and ‘crash’ in the park, when daylight came. Holly also knew on those nights, he used pills to cope with his inner demons. She resolved to find help for him, when they met again, the following week.

It was whilst clearing the dishes from Mum’s lamb casserole; the 6 o’clock news blaring in the background that Holly’s legs suddenly collapsed – her head hitting the floor.


When Holly came to, it was easy to forget the news story. Surely, she’d see Manfred’s smiling face again, at the end of the week.

After work on Friday, Holly rushed down to the City Bridge, anxiously looking for Manfred’s slouching figure, waiting as he did, in their usual spot.


An empty seat.

A gut wrenching, tearing despair mixed with utter hopelessness blinded her thoughts. Was Manfred really gone?

With trepidation, Holly peered over the police tape cordoning the City Bridge’s narrow railing, her throat filled with bile.

A wilted flower was forlornly tucked in the wires. As Holly pulled it out, a gum wrapper fluttered to the ground. Her heart broke as she read the words scrawled thereon:

“Home, ship Home”


Something different for Sunday Sayings this week

Appreciate and treasure the moments with others.

There isn’t always a second chance.

“The things which are most important don’t always scream the loudest” – Bob Hawke


17 responses to “Short story by Amanda”

  1. What a beautiful story and reminder, Ineke and Trompie ❤ Pawkisses for a wonderful week ahead🐾😽💞

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    1. I also thought the same that’s why I wanted to share it with others. Lots of love to you.

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    2. Thanks so much for saying so!


  2. Sjoe, dit is spesiaal en dit laat mens weereens besef, koester elke oomblik.

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    1. Koester elke oomblik, baie mooi gestel. Presies hoe dit moet wees.

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  3. A heartrending story, but excellently written.

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    1. Ek dink Amanda het goeie gevoel vir skryf.

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    2. Thanks for the lovely compliment, Hester. Are you still writing that wonderful poetry?

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      1. Hi Amadna, no, I am currently busy with an Afrikaans writing course and I am trying to read as many Afrikaans books as possible to hone my language. This is no hardship, of course – I love reading and spend every spare minute in the online library. But one of these days … Are you perhaps planning another poetry challenge.

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        1. Well done to you for studying Afrikaans. I love learning languages. I have been learning Danish and Norwegian ( very similar except in pronunciation) – for a few years now.
          No I am not planning another poetry challenge. It was great fun, but I prefer writing non fiction or travel tips and the occasional fictional story, like this one. Is there a reason you want to improve your Afrikaans?

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          1. I was brought up in an Afrikaans speaking family and studied at Afrikaans schools / university. However, English is the prevailing language in the corporate world and when I retired, I realised that my Afrikaans language skills are rusted, and the language has evolved to such an extend that I could no longer hold my own even in the informal Afrikaans blogging environment. I was totally out of touch with the latest Afrikaans books, music and other cultural activities. This is a conscious return to my roots.

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            1. I imagine that will be very rewarding for you. Enjoy.

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  4. Wow, beautifully written!

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    1. So kind of you to say so – Thank you Pederbytjie

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  5. This was reallt beautiful

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    1. Thank you, Seegoga! That is kind of you to say so!

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