Happy days! FFfAW of 04-01-2015


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Everything is quiet. The big circus tent is empty except…..

Outstretched in the middle of the arena is someone. His face, colored in red, blue and white. Coco the clown. He is so exhausted after the nights performance. He can hardly get up but has a big smile on his face. Happiness shines from his watery blue eyes. He feels so happy he could go on dancing forever.

Coco was a lonely old man most of his adult life. He loved to make people happy and let them laugh. This evening was not different. He started his performance as usual. Suddenly he saw the young mother with her disabled son in the front row. They were thoroughly  enjoying the performance. After some minutes Coco realized, it was his daughter and grandson. The thought at first overwhelmed him but then he let go and gave it his all.

After the show they waited for him and they were going to come back and visit him the next day.

Now, the only thing Coco can do is wait for tomorrow. No  matter how tired he feels now. Tomorrow  is going to be the best day of his life.


15 responses to “Happy days! FFfAW of 04-01-2015”

  1. afairymind Avatar

    Lovely story. 🙂 It sounds like Coco deserve a some happiness – I hope the reunion goes well.

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      Thanks, I think they have a lot to talk about.

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  2. milliethom Avatar

    A heartwarming story with a wonderfully happy ending. A family reunion will be so good for Coco.

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      Yes, it happened in the next chapter!

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  3. rondomtaliedraai Avatar

    Ek dink ek moet in die vervolg van die ander kant af begin lees

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      H ha, dit was maar oevallig dat ek dit laat aansluit het by volgende storie.

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      1. rondomtaliedraai Avatar

        Dis nie jou skuld nie

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  4. nowathome Avatar

    Happy for them all!

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      Happy indeed! (Dis vir my nogal lekker om te sit en die goed uit te dink!)

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  5. anotherday2paradise Avatar

    Lovely story with a happy ending. 🙂

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      Thank you glad you like it! 😀

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      1. anotherday2paradise Avatar

        You write very well. 🙂

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  6. Priceless Joy Avatar

    Ahh, that is so sweet! I love it. Coco is going to see his daughter and grandson and I imagine he hasn’t seen his daughter in a very long time and probably never has seen his grandson. I love happy endings. Nicely done!

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    1. scrapydotwo Avatar
      scrapydotwo

      Thank you,there is way to much heartache around us, happiness is much better.

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      1. Priceless Joy Avatar

        You are so right!

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