DRUPPELS

 

Druppel, druppel, druppel

Huppel, huppel, huppel

Op en af

In die lug

Lewensdruppels

Vol verwagting

Huppel, huppel, druppel.

Hoër, hoër

Op

Laat los

Af, af, af

Hang n oomblik

Verder, af, af

DAN

Bars, spat

plat, plat, plat

Verwagting weg

Hoop weg

Net nat, net niks

Net niks.

Ineke 2 Mei 2018

Vir verdere inligting oor die uitdaging kliek asb op skakel:

https://scrapydo2.wordpress.com/2018/05/01/a-en-i-poesie-uitdaging-no-3-mei-2018/

 

Ineke 2 Mei 2018

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18 responses to “A en I Poësie uitdaging no 3: Druppels”

  1. A & I Poësie uitdaging: Junie – I scrap 2 Avatar

    […] Die “A & I Poësie uitdaging” is reeds vir ‘n paar maande aan die gang en ons poëtiese gemeenskap groei elke maand. (Hier is ‘n voorbeeld) […]

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  2. Poetry Challenge and Entries for May – Something to Ponder About Avatar

    […] Bilingual Ineke writes about life’s ups and downs – scrapydo2.wordpress.com/ […]

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  3. Forestwood Avatar

    I am just now writing a reminder post for the May submissions, if you want to remind readers in Afrikaans. I will post it tonight.

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      Cool, I’ll remind them too!

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  4. Kameel Avatar
    Kameel

    Dis goed geskryf Scrapy.

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  5. restlessjo Avatar

    Intriguing photo, Ineke 🙂 🙂 Sounds like you’re having fun with this challenge.

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      Yes, it’s something I’ve never done before.

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  6. travel460 Avatar

    Scrapy, dis baie goed geskryf!

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  7. Abrie Joubert Avatar

    Ja daar is ontnugtering en daarom moet die vasgevang word. En hier id dit goed gedoen

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      Ek kan maar nie wegbeweeg van die donker kan van die lewe nie. Dankie vir jou mooi kommentaar.

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  8. HesterLeyNel Avatar

    Mooi metafoor wat jy hier gebruik het. Skielik lees ek nou baie gedigte en begin nou regtig eers die kunsvorm waardeer. Jy en Amanda doen goeie werk.

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      Baie dankie Hester. Dis vir my n heel nuwe uitdaging. Ek is nog steeds n beginner. Amanda gee beslis goeie inligting deur.

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  9. Forestwood Avatar

    Very interesting poem, Ineke. I thought a lot about raindrops but also about the ups and downs of life as well.

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    1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

      Thanks, Amanda, when I saw the bubbles or balls it reminded me of soap bubbles. Life has many ups and downs, isn’t it?

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      1. Forestwood Avatar

        Absolutely and we stress a lot over the downs but it is a part of life that helps us to appreciate the ups!!!

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        1. scrapydo2.wordpress.com Avatar

          We also need to concentrate more on the ups too!

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